Yay! it’s time for Vivian Kirkfield’s 2nd Annual #50Precious Words Contest!
(Loud cheering, please!)
The contest is based on the challenge from Bennet Cerf to Theodore Geisel, better known as Dr. Seuss, to write a children’s book using only 50 words. True, the classic book, Green Eggs and Ham, has over 700 words…but in keeping with his challenge, the story only contains 50 unique words.
Vivian’s contest? 50 words total!
Coming in at exactly 50 words, here is my entry.
PET STORE PROBLEM
by Leslie L Goodman
Ten doggies at the pet store.
I’m sure I can’t decide.
Plump and shaggy, sleepy, happy,
wrinkled, and brown-eyed.
Then, over in the corner,
four puppies squirm and wiggle.
Seeing me they bound on over.
My insides start to giggle.
Although my house is small,
I’ll simply take them all.
I hope you’ll stop by on Friday, March 10th for my interview with picture book author, Janet Nolan. And because Friday is also Perfect Picture Book Friday, I’ll be reviewing her remarkable book, Seven and a Half Tons of Steel.
Seven and a Half Tons of Steel is a story that follows the journey of a steel beam that once belonged to the World Trade Center and became the bow of a navy ship.
Good luck to all who enter Vivian’s 50 precious Words Contest!
Delightful poem, Leslie! I especially chuckled at the thought of taking four home; that’s something my kids would definitely suggest. Good luck in the contest!
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The poem is very much about me. I have low resistance to animals in shelters and at the pet store. That’s probably why my house is a little bit of a zoo.
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Awesome, Leslie! So glad you shared your wonderful #50PreciousWords! Fun rhyme..and perfect ending! Well done. 😉
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Thank you, Vivian. I must have written three or four of these 50-word stories until I wrote this one and liked it best. Many thanks for hosting a terrific contest that forces writers to choose only the best words and leaves no space to waste words. This is a valuable exercise that helps in all areas of writing.
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Oh, you are a doggie lover extraordinaire. Kids can surely identify. Cute!
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Yes, I love dogs. Frankly, I love all animals and have a nice variety of pets peeping, swimming, crawling, sleeping, and following me around the house.
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I can picture your home filled with puppies, Leslie!
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Puppies, birds, a tortoise, fish, tree frogs, a dog. Yes, my house is a lively place.
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Great story. Really well-crafted. And I loved Seven and a Half Tons of Steel. Can’t wait for Friday. Thanks.
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Thanks, Joanne,
I’m glad you liked my entry to Vivian’s 50 precious words contest. And, I’m looking forward to sharing the interview with Janet Nolan on Friday. She’s quite a talented author.
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That’s a lot of puppies! Good luck!
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And all so irresistible! Thank you for the good luck wishes, and thank you for visiting my blog.
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Take them all. What a great choice! Wonderful story.
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Thanks, David! I’m glad you liked the ending of my little story. I had so much fun writing this one.
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Fabulous story, love the ending!
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Thank you, Blanche, I’m glad you like my entry to Vivian’s contest. And thank you for visiting my blog.
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I love your story, Leslie! I can so relate. What is a loving home without a menagerie of God’s little creatures! Great rhyming, and sweet ending.
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Thank you, Jill. Home wouldn’t be home without all the yips and yaps and peeps and cheeps. I’m happy you liked my story.
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